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Sacrifice by ~1-900-usa-lola:icon1-900-usa-lola:

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Sacrifice

If you saw
Why did you not let me know?
Why did you wait,
Until my heart was ready to explode?

Now all that I have left
Are whispered memories of your name
This love I cannot bear,
I can only hang my head in shame.

True love does not exist
It is only a fictitious thing.
But if you saw,
Why did you let me get this way?

I sit here crying
It is time to do my part.
I must sacrifice
My freshly wounded heart.
©2008 ~1-900-usa-lola
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Like i got the idea to write this poem while looking at a tree, but once i started writing it i sort of changed directions w/ it.
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~mizunojewel:iconmizunojewel: Jun 13, 2008, 10:29:41 AM
aww.....you have a tree lover^-^ lol

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Mizunojewel



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I've loved the stars to fondly to be fearful of the night.
~1-900-usa-lola:icon1-900-usa-lola: Jun 13, 2008, 1:05:40 PM
.... ur dead nxt time i c u

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Standing in the middle of the road is very dangerous; you get knocked down by traffic on both sides.
~SeinoriKoketsu:iconSeinoriKoketsu: Jun 14, 2008, 5:31:59 PM Mood: Love
wow i never thought you would like nature enough to have a tree lover! XD :thumb88525349:

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To be in love means that you except the persons past,present and future, their accomplishments and failures, a pillar for support.....but most importantly.to be in love means you will never be alone.
~1-900-usa-lola:icon1-900-usa-lola: Jun 15, 2008, 2:40:35 PM
...u n mizuno r both dead 2 me now....

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Standing in the middle of the road is very dangerous; you get knocked down by traffic on both sides.
~SeinoriKoketsu:iconSeinoriKoketsu: Jun 15, 2008, 6:11:06 PM Mood: Tearful
thats so mean T-T*cries* just becuase you love a tree doesn't mean we still cant be friends

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To be in love means that you except the persons past,present and future, their accomplishments and failures, a pillar for support.....but most importantly.to be in love means you will never be alone.
~1-900-usa-lola:icon1-900-usa-lola: Jun 15, 2008, 6:21:17 PM
awww, i didnt mean it like that. and bsides, i only got the idea from the way a trees branches look so twisted when u look up n2 it, but theyre not. Thats wat i meant bi i got the idea frm a tree.

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Standing in the middle of the road is very dangerous; you get knocked down by traffic on both sides.
~SeinoriKoketsu:iconSeinoriKoketsu: Jun 15, 2008, 6:28:09 PM Mood: Awestruck
ok thats cool! ^________________^

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To be in love means that you except the persons past,present and future, their accomplishments and failures, a pillar for support.....but most importantly.to be in love means you will never be alone.
~1-900-usa-lola:icon1-900-usa-lola: Jun 15, 2008, 6:30:05 PM
yeah, but it ended up turning n2 sumthing different than i had planned. i wanted it 2 remain a tree and not turn n2 a heart

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Standing in the middle of the road is very dangerous; you get knocked down by traffic on both sides.
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